Thursday, May 16, 2013

A Place in the Universe

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A benevolent Universe
Lights my path
Sending me messages
in a myriad of ways
Helping me traverse
through this lifetime
as in lifetimes before

My immortal lover
Holding me 
in an eternal embrace
Leading me 
In a cosmic dance 
Comforting me
Protecting me
From the beyond

My Spiritual guide
Taking my soul 
On a journey 
Through space and time
Helping me 
to liberate myself
From the effects of Karma
 to attain Moksha

My place in the Universe
Is with my Divine Soulmate
In His heart
By His side
Helping humanity
Together
From age to age
To eternity


Moksha - liberation from samsara, the cycle of death and rebirth


Written for Verse First - A place in the Universe

Linking to:    dVerse Open Link Night #97  The Poetry Pantry #150



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48 comments:

  1. Beautiful lines, Suzy, " Helping me
    to liberate myself
    From the effects of Karma
    to attain Moksha"
    We all dream of it, try doing it but not all succeed.

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    1. Thanks Sulekha. Yes, moksha is very hard to attain, but each life lived with wisdom takes us one step closer.

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  2. This is very beautifully written.

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  3. I have a special place in my heart for this poem...Loved it. :)

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    1. Thanks sweet Jessica. Glad you liked it.

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  4. God in our heart, all will be well...

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  5. Beautiful, wise, and deeply romantic loved it!

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    1. Thanks Mindlovemisery for your lovely comment.

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  6. This is incredibly beautiful to read, and is a wonderful belief system, as well. I especially love "helping humanity together." Lovely.

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    1. Thanks Sherry. It's taken me years to come to this conclusion and now my life is infinitely sweeter.

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  7. This is lovely and I can feel your heart/

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  8. That last stanza is so beautiful. Love "from age to age to eternity." Oh that it will be so!

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    1. Thanks Mary - and so it shall be :)

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  9. very beautiful. perfected to be wished in verses so true to the heart!

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  10. You express your journey toward self-actualization beautifully, eloquently. A lovely piece to read, Suzy.

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    1. Thanks Kim. I didn't intentionally do that though - I just wrote as I thought. Perhaps I was Divinely guided!

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  11. What a beautiful, spiritually awakening poem!

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    1. Thanks Lisa. I'm glad you liked it and found it spiritually awakening. I hope others did too. :)

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  12. sounds like you are indeed in the right place

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  13. helping humanity is a high calling, but a beautiful expression of that love your eternal gives you...lovely bit of worship, this...smiles.

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    1. Thanks Brian. I hope it's my calling - it's something I dream about often.

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    2. then i would say it probably is one of your passions...we need all the people we can get doing it...smiles.

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  14. Beautiful expression of a spiritual destination.

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  15. Beautiful composition Suzi!! You live in India? :)

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    1. Thanks Tarang. No I don't live in India now but I was born there and lived there for many years.

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  16. I came back for another read, from the Pantry. Loved it just as much!

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    1. Thanks Sherry, that's so sweet.

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  17. I like the spiritual guide taking over your soul ~ This is a lovely message ~ And nice to meet you ~

    Grace

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    1. Thanks Grace. So much easier to walk through life with a guide to lead. thanks for visiting.

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  18. ...i can feel you are on the right way... may you become closer to your God of silence... smiles...

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    1. Thanks Kelvin. I hope for that too.

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