Sunday, December 8, 2013

The gift

Written for  Poetry Jam - Gifts   Verse First - Gifts and Blessings
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The heart of gold you gave to me
A symbol from the blue
An angel handed it to me
In a dream I lived with you

Your soul you merged with mine through that
A message of your love
My body bathed in your enchanting glow
And peaceful like a dove

The heart of gold you gave to me
A symbol of our love
My heart is joined with yours you said
In an everlasting bond

~x~


This poem is based on an event that took place during one of my meditations recently. Feeling blessed.




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36 comments:

  1. UnknownDecember 8, 2013 at 11:53 PM

    Very nice poem! I find writing a poem a lot difficult and somehow your poem just blends :)

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  2. PeggyDecember 9, 2013 at 1:03 PM

    I love the idea of hearts bonded in love. Very nicely done.

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    1. SuzyDecember 16, 2013 at 8:45 PM

      Thanks Peggy. Prompt and meditation came together nicely.

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  3. MaryDecember 9, 2013 at 2:07 PM

    What beautiful sentiments expressed here. It is nice to have a 'heart of gold' to symbolize the connection between two hearts. What a beautiful love!

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    1. SuzyDecember 22, 2013 at 12:40 AM

      Thanks Mary. It felt good in the meditation. Now if only I knew who it was that sent that heart of gold :)

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  4. rudraprayagaDecember 9, 2013 at 9:36 PM

    Lovely words or everlasting love,Suzy.

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    1. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:24 PM

      Thanks Rudraprayaga. Glad you liked my poem and thanks for visiting.

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  5. SaravDecember 10, 2013 at 3:51 AM

    What a beautiful poem, it made me smile and sigh. Very heartwarming :-)

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    1. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:24 PM

      Thanks Sara for your very sweet comment and for visiting.Glad my poem warmed your heart.

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  6. Brian MillerDecember 12, 2013 at 2:42 AM

    it is nice to have those tangible memories of your love, their love to hold...def to keep in mind the strength of your connection....

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    1. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:26 PM

      Thanks Brian. Soul connections are special and nice to know that they can be felt if not yet seen.

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  7. JeffDecember 12, 2013 at 4:14 AM

    Two hearts merged . . . and now forever mindful.
    Nicely written.
    Cheers!

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    1. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:27 PM

      Thanks Jeff. Nice to know out there somewhere is a soul that merges with mine. Glad you liked it.

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  8. DulcinaDecember 12, 2013 at 2:49 PM

    What a precious experience you had! Nicely written, Suzy, and very appropriate for this time of the year.

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    1. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:29 PM

      Thanks Dulcina. Yes it was awesome. Must meditate on that again. Thanks for visiting.

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  9. Sumana RoyDecember 16, 2013 at 11:41 PM

    love the words that have transcended the boundary of physical and mental and now reaching for the spiritual....beautiful lines Suzy

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    1. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:30 PM

      Thanks Sumana. Reaching the spiritual brings me great peace and joy. Glad you liked it.

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  10. AditiDecember 17, 2013 at 3:00 AM

    That was so beautiful!! An everlasting love...

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  11. Anand S UnniDecember 17, 2013 at 3:54 AM

    I just loved the opening para. I believe it clearly brought us straight into the poem and you thoughts.

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    1. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:32 PM

      Thanks Anand. Glad you liked it. I like the opening para too as that's exactly how it happened in the meditation.

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  12. AnonymousDecember 17, 2013 at 7:27 PM

    Beautiful words. I really enjoyed reading it!!

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    1. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:32 PM

      Thanks Weekend-Windup. Glad you liked it and thanks for visiting.

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  13. moondustwriterDecember 22, 2013 at 12:09 AM

    You convey earthly and heavenly love in this poem. A blessing to be enfolded in the both!
    Merry Christmas to you and yours...

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    1. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:33 PM

      Thanks Moondustwriter. That's exactly what I was trying to convey. Glad you got it and liked it. Merry Christmas to you too. Thanks for visiting.

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  14. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:29 PM

    Thanks Laura.

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  15. SuzyDecember 23, 2013 at 4:32 PM

    Thanks Gautami. Glad you liked it.

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  16. Brian MillerDecember 23, 2013 at 5:19 PM

    merry christmas suzy...i wish you holidays full of love and warmth...
    smiles.

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    1. SuzyDecember 24, 2013 at 12:46 AM

      Thanks Brian. Wish you the same. Enjoy your Christmas.

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  17. UnknownDecember 24, 2013 at 4:04 AM

    What a heart-warming write Suzy with an excellent word choice. :)

    Best wishes
    Ankita

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    1. SuzyDecember 24, 2013 at 2:18 PM

      Thanks Ankita. Glad you liked it and thanks for dropping by.

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  18. Vandana SharmaDecember 24, 2013 at 8:30 PM

    A wonderful piece of poetry, just soothes the heart:)

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  19. Tarang SinhaDecember 31, 2013 at 4:44 PM

    Beautiful composition!:)

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