Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Caller ID

For  GBE2's prompt - Caller ID

Also linking to dVerse Open Link Night


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You tried to reach me several times
Through nature, dreams, and songs
I did not hear the ringing tones
Oblivious I rode along

And then one day you showed yourself
In an unexpected way
How could I have missed you all these years
Seems like my life I threw away

The strange disjointed moments
Somehow fell into place
Like jigsaw puzzle pieces
And delicate crocheted lace

How could I have forgotten
The adventures that we carved
Your ID etched into my soul
The caller of my heart.


~x~


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24 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 3, 2013 at 12:45 PM

    Beautiful poem

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  2. Brian MillerApril 3, 2013 at 2:05 PM

    smiles...nice play on the caller ID...i like how they tried to reach you several ways...this has a spiritual feel to it for sure...smiles.

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    1. SuzyApril 3, 2013 at 3:56 PM

      Thanks Brian. Yep, it is meant to be spiritual. Glad you liked it.

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  3. AnonymousApril 3, 2013 at 2:17 PM

    This reminds me of Francis Thompson's poem--The Hound of Heaven--redacted for 2013!

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    1. SuzyApril 3, 2013 at 4:05 PM

      Hi Liv2write2day - that is truly a poem - mine just can't compare. But thank you.

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  4. AnonymousApril 3, 2013 at 3:31 PM

    yeah, the first thing I thought of was an answering machine and then the caller ID came up

    Where is the Food when mother is not?

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    1. SuzyApril 3, 2013 at 4:11 PM

      Thanks Zongrik - wanted to do something different with Caller ID.

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  5. Corinne RodriguesApril 3, 2013 at 3:38 PM

    I love the way you've weaved a deep spiritual message into something so contemporary, Suzy. That's exactly the way I like my spiritual messages, thank you. :)

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    1. SuzyApril 3, 2013 at 4:14 PM

      Thanks Corinne. It's also one that's close to my heart.

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  6. anthonynorthApril 3, 2013 at 9:11 PM

    I felt the spirituality in this, too. Nice one.

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    1. SuzyApril 4, 2013 at 9:21 AM

      Thanks Anthony. Glad you liked it and felt the essence of it.

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  7. UnknownApril 4, 2013 at 6:02 AM

    very nicely done. The ending I found especially effective, really strong piece. Thanks

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    1. SuzyApril 4, 2013 at 9:23 AM

      Thanks Fred - for visiting and for your nice comment.

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  8. LauraApril 4, 2013 at 9:56 AM

    beautifully expressed:-)

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  9. UnknownApril 6, 2013 at 9:07 AM

    very well said. love how you ended it.

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    1. SuzyApril 7, 2013 at 4:52 PM

      Thanks Julia. Glad you liked it. Thanks for visiting.

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  10. JoApril 7, 2013 at 4:08 PM

    Absolutely lovely! So creative and very well done.

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    1. SuzyApril 7, 2013 at 4:53 PM

      Thanks Jo. Thought I would do something different with the prompt.

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  11. Dances With VodkaApril 8, 2013 at 1:15 PM

    Aw! Love this!

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  12. The Write GirlApril 9, 2013 at 12:48 PM

    It feels like the reunion of two lovers. So tender and beautiful. Stunning!!

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    1. SuzyApril 9, 2013 at 1:27 PM

      Thanks Write Girl. It is a spiritual reunion of two lovers. :)

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