Thursday, May 16, 2013

A Place in the Universe

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A benevolent Universe
Lights my path
Sending me messages
in a myriad of ways
Helping me traverse
through this lifetime
as in lifetimes before

My immortal lover
Holding me 
in an eternal embrace
Leading me 
In a cosmic dance 
Comforting me
Protecting me
From the beyond

My Spiritual guide
Taking my soul 
On a journey 
Through space and time
Helping me 
to liberate myself
From the effects of Karma
 to attain Moksha

My place in the Universe
Is with my Divine Soulmate
In His heart
By His side
Helping humanity
Together
From age to age
To eternity


Moksha - liberation from samsara, the cycle of death and rebirth


Written for Verse First - A place in the Universe

Linking to:    dVerse Open Link Night #97  The Poetry Pantry #150



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46 comments:

  1. sulekkhaMay 16, 2013 at 10:56 PM

    Beautiful lines, Suzy, " Helping me
    to liberate myself
    From the effects of Karma
    to attain Moksha"
    We all dream of it, try doing it but not all succeed.

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    1. SuzyMay 16, 2013 at 11:12 PM

      Thanks Sulekha. Yes, moksha is very hard to attain, but each life lived with wisdom takes us one step closer.

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  2. Carolina HeartStringsMay 16, 2013 at 11:55 PM

    Beautiful. Wisdom is liberating.

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  3. AnonymousMay 17, 2013 at 12:02 AM

    This is very beautifully written.

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  4. Jessica MMay 17, 2013 at 1:09 AM

    I have a special place in my heart for this poem...Loved it. :)

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    1. SuzyMay 17, 2013 at 10:06 PM

      Thanks sweet Jessica. Glad you liked it.

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  5. Vandana SharmaMay 17, 2013 at 1:22 AM

    God in our heart, all will be well...

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  6. AnonymousMay 17, 2013 at 3:15 AM

    Beautiful, wise, and deeply romantic loved it!

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    1. SuzyMay 17, 2013 at 10:09 PM

      Thanks Mindlovemisery for your lovely comment.

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  7. Sherry Blue SkyMay 17, 2013 at 3:23 AM

    This is incredibly beautiful to read, and is a wonderful belief system, as well. I especially love "helping humanity together." Lovely.

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    1. SuzyMay 17, 2013 at 10:11 PM

      Thanks Sherry. It's taken me years to come to this conclusion and now my life is infinitely sweeter.

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  8. alan1704May 17, 2013 at 3:44 AM

    This is lovely and I can feel your heart/

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  9. MaryMay 17, 2013 at 10:17 AM

    That last stanza is so beautiful. Love "from age to age to eternity." Oh that it will be so!

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  10. TCPCMay 17, 2013 at 5:31 PM

    very beautiful. perfected to be wished in verses so true to the heart!

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  11. UnknownMay 18, 2013 at 1:14 AM

    You express your journey toward self-actualization beautifully, eloquently. A lovely piece to read, Suzy.

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    1. SuzyMay 18, 2013 at 1:00 PM

      Thanks Kim. I didn't intentionally do that though - I just wrote as I thought. Perhaps I was Divinely guided!

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  12. Lisa A. WilliamsMay 19, 2013 at 10:16 AM

    What a beautiful, spiritually awakening poem!

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    1. SuzyMay 19, 2013 at 12:25 PM

      Thanks Lisa. I'm glad you liked it and found it spiritually awakening. I hope others did too. :)

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  13. anthonynorthMay 19, 2013 at 10:13 PM

    Beautifully spiritual.

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  14. Brother OllieMay 19, 2013 at 10:35 PM

    sounds like you are indeed in the right place

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  15. Brian MillerMay 19, 2013 at 11:22 PM

    helping humanity is a high calling, but a beautiful expression of that love your eternal gives you...lovely bit of worship, this...smiles.

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    1. SuzyMay 20, 2013 at 7:30 PM

      Thanks Brian. I hope it's my calling - it's something I dream about often.

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    2. Brian MillerMay 22, 2013 at 10:21 PM

      then i would say it probably is one of your passions...we need all the people we can get doing it...smiles.

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  16. LauraMay 20, 2013 at 12:52 AM

    absolutely beautiful!

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  17. Preeti S.May 20, 2013 at 3:05 AM

    Beautiful expression of a spiritual destination.

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  18. Tarang SinhaMay 20, 2013 at 3:27 AM

    Beautiful composition Suzi!! You live in India? :)

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    1. SuzyMay 20, 2013 at 8:10 PM

      Thanks Tarang. No I don't live in India now but I was born there and lived there for many years.

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  19. Sherry Blue SkyMay 20, 2013 at 6:03 AM

    I came back for another read, from the Pantry. Loved it just as much!

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  20. parentforward.blogspot.comMay 20, 2013 at 7:04 AM

    An ode to devine love.

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  21. ScarletMay 23, 2013 at 12:10 AM

    I like the spiritual guide taking over your soul ~ This is a lovely message ~ And nice to meet you ~

    Grace

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    1. SuzyMay 23, 2013 at 7:32 PM

      Thanks Grace. So much easier to walk through life with a guide to lead. thanks for visiting.

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  22. kelvin s.m.May 23, 2013 at 4:21 PM

    ...i can feel you are on the right way... may you become closer to your God of silence... smiles...

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  23. ZQMay 24, 2013 at 10:03 AM

    Amen.

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