How strange that I posted a 100 word poem on my blog Someday Somewhere just yesterday. And it fits today's prompt at Verse First .
Your task for this week's Verse First is to write succinctly and boldly about a personal experience. As you do so, rest assured that your readers will share some common ground. Be aware that the writing heals you and the reading heals others. The only rule: No more than 100 words. Succinct. Bold. GO!
So I share it again ...
Written for: Verse First - Poetry Heals
Linking to: dVerse Open Link Night #96
Your task for this week's Verse First is to write succinctly and boldly about a personal experience. As you do so, rest assured that your readers will share some common ground. Be aware that the writing heals you and the reading heals others. The only rule: No more than 100 words. Succinct. Bold. GO!
So I share it again ...
image from google images
Each morning I waited as I stood in line.
I loved those moments when his eyes met mine.
No words needed just the beat of hearts.
His time on earth was over, so he left for his home in the sky.
Now I lie alone in the darkness and as I listen to the sounds of silence, I close my eyes.
No words needed just connections through thin veils.
And then I pray to the Heavens with devotion and faith.
And in my dreams He comes to me to comfort and love.
No words needed just the fusion of souls.
Written for: Verse First - Poetry Heals
Linking to: dVerse Open Link Night #96
the fusion of souls, sounds like healing indeed
ReplyDeleteThanks Andrea - it does help me accept the situation.
DeletePowerful poem Suzy, deeply touching
ReplyDeleteThanks Mindlovemisery. His memory inspires a lot of my poems.
DeleteNo words needed just the beat of hearts - so much love in your words!
ReplyDeleteThanks Robyn - it was sweet love :)
DeleteThis is very touching, Suzy. The veil between life and death is sometimes very thin. And it is good that you feel Him comfort you in dreams.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary and thank goodness for those thin veils.
DeleteSo beautiful...very sacred words that touch the heart.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherri - glad you thought so.
DeleteNO WORDS NEEDED...........TRUE, SOMETIMES FEELINGS SPEAK MORE THAN WORDS...SOULS CONNECTED ETERNALLY...
ReplyDeleteThanks Vandana. The silent conversations are the ones I like best.
DeleteVery moving piece, lovely.
ReplyDeletethis is wonderful :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestial Dreamz.
DeleteVery lovely poem...moving.
ReplyDeleteThanks K.
DeleteSuzy! You make the reader feel the fusion. It is vivid and real. Well done.
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Thanks Kim - glad you felt it.
DeleteThat fusion much needed when souls are on distant shores
ReplyDeleteIt's the only way I can deal with it. Thanks Leslie.
DeleteI like how you remind of us that sometimes no words are needed to begin healing. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bonnie. I think that healing comes from within.
Deletesmiles..it's cool when the connection stays even though the person is not physically there...
ReplyDeleteIt sure is Claudia - and most reassuring too.
Deletesmiles...i love that no words are needed....i am sorry for your loss...it is hard....but you are right that sometimes you still feel that connection...
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian and thank goodness for that connection.
DeleteI can relate all too well!
ReplyDeletehugs Rosemary.
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