Verse First - I cried out
Write in the first person. Avoid cliches; eschew the ordinary. Surprise, inspire, educate, elucidate. That's it.
Wow - Fun with Repetition
your entry has to have one sentence that is repeated at least thrice in your post. You cannot repeat the sentence consecutively.
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Why are you so elusive
I cried out, my beloved Lord
My soul it cannot truly live
Without your love and accord
I cannot find you anywhere
I cried out, my beloved Lord
My soul is weary with many a tear
My heart desolate and gored
Please hear my prayer
I cried out, my beloved Lord
For you are my life, and breath and air
For aeons you I have adored
Let me hear your sweet flute
I cried out, my beloved Lord
For that's my guiding star, the route
That makes my spirit soar.
~x~
The vision of You
Is a sight to behold
A beautiful blue
And a halo of gold
I sat in awe
As she described You to me
My soul did soar
You set my spirit free
A moment Divine
Is now etched in my soul
I long for another sign
And your vision to hold.
~x~
Poetry Jam - Vision and G-Man -Friday Flash 55
The vision of You
Is a sight to behold
A beautiful blue
And a halo of gold
I sat in awe
As she described You to me
My soul did soar
You set my spirit free
A moment Divine
Is now etched in my soul
I long for another sign
And your vision to hold.
~x~
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. We give out themes for creative writing each weekend for Indian bloggers.
Update 30/10/2013 - My post was selected as a WoW post
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