A true hero isn't measured by the size of his strength,
but by the strength of his heart - Hercules
Sitting quietly
A tough life silently lived
Uncared, yet content
Uncared, yet content
Powerful people
Gym bodies, expensive things,
Judging, scorn old man
Timid little thing
Gym bodies, expensive things,
Judging, scorn old man
Timid little thing
Not much to share, just hello
Blessings from old man.
I am taking part in the Write Tribe Festival of Words
For the June 2018 festival I thought I would write some haiku and give this neglected blog a little love. Trying to bring back the poetry mojo.
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that was quite an lovely poem and did complete justice to the prompt
ReplyDeleteThanks Akshata. Glad you liked it.
DeleteYou have a gift. Beautiful words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ness. That's such a sweet and encouraging comment. I love writing haiku.
DeleteA good heart that spreads joy and happiness is more valuable than a strong physique or millions in the bank. Did good justice to the prompt Suzy
ReplyDeleteThanks Anshu. Yes I agree completely with your comment - a good heart always shines.
DeleteMeaningful Haiku, loved all of them!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sheela. Glad you liked them.
DeleteWow the most powerful of them all
ReplyDelete" blessings from an old man"
Thanks. I think blessings are by far the best gift you could give anyone.
Delete'Blessings from old man' that's such a noble thought.
ReplyDeleteThanks. Glad you thought that. Blessings are powerful.
DeleteA poem on every prompt surely a big talent. Loved the last line "blessing from an old man"
ReplyDeleteThanks Vidhi. Glad you liked my poems and thank you for dropping by and reading them all.
DeleteThis touched my soul Suzy, beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteThanks Vartika. So glad you liked it so much. When a poem touches someone's soul, then it was worth writing it. Thank you for such a nice comment.
DeleteBeautiful Haiku. I have enjoyed reading your posts throughout the challenge. Congratulations on successfully completing this challenge.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sonia. Glad you liked my haiku. Congratulations to you too.
DeleteThat’s such a splendid take on the prompt, Suzy! Loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks Rashmi. Glad you liked it.
DeleteI am visiting for the first time and started with such a beautifully expressed Haiku. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Dishki and welcome to my blog. Glad you liked it.
DeleteA good heart is all it takes. Well said Suzy.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tulika. Glad you liked it.
DeleteCreatives ones :)
ReplyDeleteGreat happy ending too! Liked to watch the video.
Thanks Anita. Glad you liked it. I thought I would include the video to give the disney theme some context.
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