No matter how your heart is grieving, if you keep on believing, the dream that you wish will come true - Cinderella
Shattered dreams, heart sad
Life loomed large, hope fading fast
Reality harsh
Eyes closed, dreaming hard
Beliefs held onto tightly
Never giving up
Universe responds
Summoning Divine forces
Making wishes true.
I am taking part in the Write Tribe Festival of Words
For the June 2018 festival I thought I would write some haiku and give this neglected blog a little love. Trying to bring back the poetry mojo.
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Universe responds
ReplyDeleteSummoning Divine forces
Making wishes true.
That just hits the spot. Crisp and powerful, Suzy.
Thanks Natasha. I'm a great believer that the Universe always responds to wishes that are made in earnest.
DeleteI agree with Natasha... that last stanza really adds a powerful punch at the end...
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Thanks Roshan. Glad you liked it.
DeleteWow each word was full of hope and inspiration. Suzy you are amazing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bhavna. I believe that hope, faith and trust are the things that keep us going.
DeleteUniverse responds.....I believe in this with all my heart :) The universe does respond. Beautiful, inspiring lines, Suzy!
ReplyDeleteThanks Rashmi. I believe it too.
DeleteWise words
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Loved it, Suzy!
Thanks Glad you liked it.
DeleteYet another beautiful poem. I have been reading your post past three days and u did incredible poems.
ReplyDeleteThanks Deepa for your very nice comment. Glad you are enjoying my poems.
DeleteBeautiful poem. Great rhythm. I never seem to get that quite right, but you've mastered it. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ness. Glad you liked it and thanks for the lovely comment.
DeleteVery powerful one Suzy
ReplyDeleteThanks Vartika. Glad you liked it.
DeleteLovely poem Suzy! A few words but they deliver a powerful message!
ReplyDeleteThanks Anshu. Glad you liked it.
DeleteTruly inspiring. If we decide to never give up, the entire universe responds and makes our wishes come true. Will remember that always
ReplyDeleteThanks Vidhi. I'm a believer of that. Always hope and have faith in the Universe.
DeleteUniverse always responds to our wishes, sometimes early and the other times a little later. When some wishes are not at all fulfilled in a much larger span then those dreams may not be meant for us.
ReplyDeleteWell said Geethica. Sometimes wishes are fulfilled in ways we don't expect.
DeleteOh yes, the Universe does respond to heartfelt wishes.
ReplyDeleteHi Tulika, I truly believe that.
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