Friday, June 29, 2018

Cinderella - Day6 #WriteBravely


No matter how your heart is grieving, if you keep on believing, the dream that you wish will come true - Cinderella


Shattered dreams, heart sad
Life loomed large, hope fading fast
Reality harsh

Eyes closed, dreaming hard
Beliefs held onto tightly
Never giving up

Universe responds
Summoning Divine forces
Making wishes true.









I am taking part in the Write Tribe Festival of Words

For the June 2018 festival I thought I would write some haiku and give this neglected blog a little love. Trying to bring back the poetry mojo.







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24 comments:

  1. Universe responds
    Summoning Divine forces
    Making wishes true.

    That just hits the spot. Crisp and powerful, Suzy.

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    1. Thanks Natasha. I'm a great believer that the Universe always responds to wishes that are made in earnest.

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  2. I agree with Natasha... that last stanza really adds a powerful punch at the end...

    Godyears.net

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    1. Thanks Roshan. Glad you liked it.

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  3. Wow each word was full of hope and inspiration. Suzy you are amazing.

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    1. Thanks Bhavna. I believe that hope, faith and trust are the things that keep us going.

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  4. Universe responds.....I believe in this with all my heart :) The universe does respond. Beautiful, inspiring lines, Suzy!

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    1. Thanks Rashmi. I believe it too.

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  5. Wise words
    in the guise of verse.

    Loved it, Suzy!

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  6. Yet another beautiful poem. I have been reading your post past three days and u did incredible poems.

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    1. Thanks Deepa for your very nice comment. Glad you are enjoying my poems.

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  7. Beautiful poem. Great rhythm. I never seem to get that quite right, but you've mastered it. Nice work.

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    1. Thanks Ness. Glad you liked it and thanks for the lovely comment.

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    1. Thanks Vartika. Glad you liked it.

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  9. Lovely poem Suzy! A few words but they deliver a powerful message!

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    1. Thanks Anshu. Glad you liked it.

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  10. Truly inspiring. If we decide to never give up, the entire universe responds and makes our wishes come true. Will remember that always

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    1. Thanks Vidhi. I'm a believer of that. Always hope and have faith in the Universe.

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  11. Universe always responds to our wishes, sometimes early and the other times a little later. When some wishes are not at all fulfilled in a much larger span then those dreams may not be meant for us.

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    1. Well said Geethica. Sometimes wishes are fulfilled in ways we don't expect.

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  12. Oh yes, the Universe does respond to heartfelt wishes.

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    1. Hi Tulika, I truly believe that.

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