Eyes Of The Goddess

She closed her eyes in eternal sleep

Her dreams fading into nothing

In life she was her parent's goddess

Kind and compassionate and loving

Her tired body could hold no more

Her soul traumatised and fading

And as she crossed into the light

The Goddess of love stood waiting

Into her arms went the tormented soul

Eyes filled with love She caressed

For the good of all she had sacrificed

Her time had come to be blessed

Her wretched rapists unfeeling and brutal

Think that in their hands lie power

But when they meet that mighty Goddess

In Her eyes will they see anger and fire.

The Goddess metes out to every soul

Karmic lessons due

Swift to love and swift to bless

And swift to punish too

The eyes of the Goddess watch us all

Can you feel her stare?

Fiery and rage filled if you stray

Or tender with love and care.

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Poetry Jam - The eyes have it

Blogadda WoW - The Goddess

Linking to:
The Tuesday Platform
Poetry Pantry 244

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

And it was chosen as a WoW post

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In A Time Gone By

Written for: Real Toads and  Blogadda WoW

Linking to:  Poetry Pantry #182

Real Toads prompt

What would it be like if we were stuck in (or have regressed to) the past? Write from the perspective of yourself or another person (real or imagined) who can’t seem to live in the present or look forward; someone who dwells in a supposedly more magnificent or rewarding past time, and behaves accordingly.

Blogadda WoW prompt
Your entry must contain a word in all its three degrees of comparison. For example: Good, Better, Best! or Great, Greater, Greatest!

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He looked magnificent

Lean and tall

Upon his chariot

I watched in awe

His bow and his arrows

He carried with grace

Strength of a warrior

But gentle of face

He seemed so familiar

Yet I knew him not

Who was this stranger?

With eyes tender and soft

Graceful and ethereal

He looked so Divine

Joyous he made me feel

Somehow I knew he was mine

Did he know that I watched him?

For suddenly he smiled

My senses he made them swim

As his eyes beheld mine

My garland of flowers 

Upon his neck looked so grand

His heart he empowered

Into my trembling hands

In a time long gone 

Was this love sweet and pure

A match made in Heaven

Through aeons it endures

Let me stay in that moment 

When his eyes beheld mine

And true love was unspoken

And hearts were entwined

For great is He, my love story
Greater than any in time
The greatest ever in glory
And supremely sublime

My take on Sita's view of Lord Rama

(And don't forget to read Lord Rama's view of Sita at She Looked Most Beautiful)


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I Cried Out

Written for:  Verse First    Poetry Jam    G-Man    WoW

Also linking to:  Poetry Pantry #164        dVerse Open Link Night #111

Verse First - I cried out
Write in the first person. Avoid cliches; eschew the ordinary. Surprise, inspire, educate, elucidate. That's it. 

Wow - Fun with Repetition
your entry has to have one sentence that is repeated at least thrice in your post. You cannot repeat the sentence consecutively.

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Why are you so elusive

I cried out, my beloved Lord

My soul it cannot truly live

Without your love and accord

I cannot find you anywhere

I cried out, my beloved Lord

My soul is weary with many a tear

My heart desolate and gored

Please hear my prayer 

I cried out, my beloved Lord

For you are my life, and breath and air

For aeons you I have adored

Let me hear your sweet flute

I cried out, my beloved Lord

For that's my guiding star, the route

That makes my spirit soar.

~x~

Poetry Jam - Vision  and  G-Man -Friday Flash 55

The vision of You
Is a sight to behold
A beautiful blue
And a halo of gold

I sat in awe
As she described You to me
My soul did soar
You set my spirit free

A moment Divine
Is now etched in my soul
I long for another sign
And your vision to hold.

~x~

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. We give out themes for creative writing each weekend for Indian bloggers.

Update 30/10/2013 - My post was selected as a WoW post

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